Analysis of LOVE FOR A FOURTEEN YEAR OLD

Ellon Rays 1998 (Nairobi)



A fourteen-year-old Love for a girl somehow made some sense, by seating in church
 and staring at a boy!
a boy who sometimes is staring at another girl,
And if by chance you were the girl getting stared at, getting stared at meant being pretty!
A fourteen-year-Old Love for a boy, meant seating through church, past Sunday school and past the first and the second services,
Love for a fourteen-year-old boy was staring at a girl
a girl who you are incomprehendably drawn to,
Love was if by chance the girl stared back,
Cheating for a fourteen-year-old boy is if another pretty girl showed up in church, and
you couldn't help but stare


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Poetic Form
Metre 011111101111111001 010101 0110111010101 011110011011101111010 0111111011101111101010010100 11011111110101 01111111 111110111 1010111111101010111010 110111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 637
Words 120
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 501
Words per stanza (avg) 113

About this poem

It is a poem about young love and how the perspective of young infatuated individuals is rationalized.

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Submitted by ellonrays on August 26, 2023

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