Analysis of August 24/2023 2:29 pm



she wore a blue dress
and my heart lurched without me even realizing it
she is the blue in my life
she reminds me of vast oceans and french hydrangeas
she is everything pure and everything beautiful
her dark brown roots and the highlights in her hair that have long faded away
her smile has the ability to shine brighter than the morning sun
her eyes reflecting that gorgeous Indian rosewood colour that enchanted me so long ago
she deserves the world
and I’d give up the air in my lungs just to give it to her
she makes it so difficult not to fall for her
and anyone would be a fool not to
she is resilient and confident
with more elegance than a 1500s princess
the radiant beauty she possesses could bring even the strongest of men to their knees
perhaps I have no right to feel this way for her
after all I am so beneath her
that I feel like sometimes I do not even deserve to look at her
but I can’t seem to pull my attention away from her
because the honest truth is
she is the most beautiful girl to ever exist in this life
and her love would be greater than gold
she wore a blue dress
and it embodied everything beautiful that I know she is


Scheme AbcadefghiijkaliiiimcnAm
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 0111011101001 1101011 10111110011 11101010100 01110010011111001 01100100111010101 0101011010011101011101 10101 011101011111110 111110011110 010110111 110100100 1110010110 0100101010111001011111 011111111110 101111010 11110111110011110 11111110100110 0101011 1101100111001011 001111011 11011 010101010011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,172
Words 245
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 921
Words per stanza (avg) 225
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on August 24, 2023

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