Analysis of The Trip



The Trip
Back on the sand
Into the ocean off of the land
Cold water breaks my skin
Lying deep from far within
Night breaks into day
From a distance far away
An old friend and a new dawn
The nights are cold, the whiskeys warm
Memories follow me into the night
A subtle reminder of rising light
In tune with every note
The missing key the antidote
We looked up at the moon
If it’s not full, it will be soon
I heard a colour and saw a sound
Quite absurd yet so profound
I lit a match and looked away
Should I go or should I stay
Too lose control but hold the wheel
No problem, no big deal
Inside the cyclone I begin to fall
Into the clouds and off the wall

Matt Thomas
6th July 2023


Scheme XAABBCCXXDDEEFFGGCCHHII XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 01 1101 010101101 110111 1011101 11011 1010101 1110011 01110101 1001010101 0100101101 0111001 0101010 111101 11111111 11010101 1011101 11010101 1111111 11011101 110111 0100110111 01010101 110 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 685
Words 144
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 268
Words per stanza (avg) 70
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Written on June 07, 2023

Submitted by matthewthomas76 on July 05, 2023

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