Analysis of Just this side of Madness



Just this side of madness
Its always just one breath away
I walk that sharp line every day
Societal slavery is plain to see
At least once every moon, it overtakes me
The walls and the wastes
The ceilings and the floors

At least one time before I sleep
Ill imagine a life without doors
Barefoot in the mud
With the rain to get clean
Eating fresh herbs and berries
In a wildflower dream

Just this side of madness
When I stare at the moon
My womb stirs with truths
Like a bass rhythm of an ancient tune
If I let go, the madnesss will set in

If I let go, I wont be back again

Societal's calculated world
Has no truths that are clear
The information everyday
Only deepens the tare

Just this side of madness
I dream myself free
And beg ancient knowledge
To come and find me

Just this side of madness


Scheme Abbccxd xdxxxx Aexex x xfbf Acxc A
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 1111101 111111001 01001001111 11110011101 01001 010001 11110111 101001011 1001 101111 1011010 00101 111110 111101 11111 1011011101 111101110 1111111101 11001 111111 0010101 101001 111110 1111 011010 11011 111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 802
Words 164
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 5, 1, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This is a poem about the edge of enlightenment. The dance between the two worlds

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Written on January 09, 2023

Submitted by CLC on July 10, 2023

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