Analysis of I am Home



Please forgive me for leaving you, please don’t feel alone.
But God told me he needed me he told me it’s time to come home.
As I was resting, soundly in my bed, I heard a knock at the door.
As An angel appeared it told me you can rest now you don’t need to worry anymore.
as I opened up my eyes another angel was standing there
as I looked into its eyes
This angel said please come with me and it took my hand and led me to the sky.
please don’t cry for me, please don’t shed a tear.
I am with my Lord and Savior. I am safe, I have no fear.
Please remember I am not alone.
Because I have entered into paradise and heaven is now my home
the angel then took my hand and told me God is waiting for you.
Your work is done there is nothing left for you to do.
as I stand there at the pearly gates waiting patiently
I look beyond the gates as I see my family.
As the gates of heaven open, they embarrass me with a hug.
They told me please don’t be scared, it’s time to meet our Lord and Savior from above.
As I stood there before my father, I didn’t know what to say.
But God knows already what’s in our hearts, so he knew exactly what I wanted to say.
As I talked with God, he told me I have done such wonderful things.
From the past to the present to my friends and my family
I asked God about my family he said don’t worry they will be okay.
For eternity means forever and you’ll see them again someday
Please don’t cry for me please don’t shed a tear.
For I am with my father now I am walking and have no fear
Please remember I’m no longer suffering.
For God has made my body whole.
I am with my family please don’t worry because I am now home.


Scheme abccdefDgabhhiijkllmillDgnob
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110111101 1111110111111111 11110100111101101 111001111111111111001 1110111010101101 1110111 1101111101111011101 1111111101 111110101111111 101011101 01111001100101111 0101111011111011 1111111011111 11111010110100 1101011111100 1011101010101101 11111111111101010101 111101110111111 11101000101111010111011 1111111111111001 101101011101100 111011100111101111 1010010100111011 1111111101 1111110111100111 10101110100 11111101 11111001110011111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,675
Words 359
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,257
Words per stanza (avg) 339

About this poem

I wrote this poem when my aunt Carmen passed away from stage four of Parkinson's.

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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by darkthunderbear21x on July 11, 2023

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Heidi Joanne Schouten

I have been writing since I was fourteen years, it was a great way to express my feelings with words and not to hurt myself. Poetry has been my best friend for a long time! more…

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