Analysis of Judgement



My trees have you cut,
Stripping me of my natural beauty,
Like Rapunzel's hair was cut,
To hide her true beauty.

My air have you made toxic,
With your massive pollution,
What was once pure and true,
Is now full of carbon.

My babies have you killed,
Not allowing nature to take its' course.
My babies souls cry,
Asking why nobody wants them.  

For a single drop of rain,
You will cry an ocean of tears,
For a single breath of air,
You will gasp to no avail.

For what is reaped will be sowed,
What is given, will be taken,
Make the most of what is given,
For you know not what tomorrow brings.


Scheme ABAB XCXC XXXX XXXX XCCX
Poetic Form Etheree  (45%)
Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 11111 1011110010 11111 110110 1111110 1110010 111101 111110 110111 1010101111 11011 101111 1010111 11111011 1010111 1111101 1111111 11101110 10111110 11111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 138
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by jessienibu on July 31, 2023

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