Analysis of nearly sleep to nearly punishment



quota digest, eise Jun 10
i caught my son sleeping without my permission. how could  i punish him?
someone's reply:-
my mother did this in my childhood. couldn't sleep, shower, eat, or talk to friends or family without her permissions, which i never got.
if you want to lose your son due to your control loss, feel free to punish him, but coming from a kid who never got to live freely he will never be able to recover from it. worse, you'll never see him again. don't punish a child for needing things.
......
the reply make me go back and sleep in the battle, war places and see if there is any permission of the child to be punished by his parents or too. nothing seems to deny the child his every right. which in hind side reflects the appreciations of his parents prioritizing glimpses....greenlights...go aheads....eyelocks...
........
until settlement is reached, here is my notion...hansae abzia ybl gedim tegadalay solomon dirar....
until the son gives his permission,
'i have a dream' ready takeaway for free to wake him up with.
let's wake him up punishing with good dreams in lieu of cold water or stances.
...i have had nearly the like experience which i won't deny the benefit of letting your son sleep wherever whenever possible for sleep unlike dream is scarce resources?. dka nai lbu yhalm....enda qusoon enda suwueti genet bmengedi enda suwuE bereket abel....'nenxifelu' eta aarat keyeberaberna....edaga derhoot...ayna zhaze...'wedeshi you have to sleep on the bed you made once more...¡


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About this poem

dedicated if dedicatable to sawan znaban..radiotata...metaalmtna, allemtna...fata enda hintsa , enda mekoninat kulu gibjian, elal ms gual ankere, fihira, gual goniche, ...azaziom, grazie mile mediko araia eyob mesarihitu, asmien enda atswar astequash metealmtu,...nab rubda, girmayka..azazi enda sileya embatikala or mai habar... aya aba habeshn zeytiberabereley gino'u...gracias¡....

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Written on July 26, 2023

Submitted by Yuknno.ghirmay on July 26, 2023

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