Analysis of Trying

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



When I try the well runs dry.

If I wait,  mate!

When I share it's because I care.

If I offend I've bucked the trend..

When will I escape?

If no one knows the date.

So here I lie
And wonder why...
But I will wait
It's not to late...

I love a happy ending.


Scheme A B X X X B AABB X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 1111 11110111 11011101 11101 111101 1111 0101 1111 1111 1101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 265
Words 72
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on July 21, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on July 20, 2023

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