Analysis of Soaring to God There is no Better Winning

Ronald Bunch 1982 (Grand Rapids)



Love, reaching boundless joy!
I’m on the good side I enjoy.
I climb hazards to peek above
The mountain of evil to visit
God with love.

But I must peek fast
And get out of there
Before I fall my last.
And if I do fall God
Catches me with a
Safety net, that I
Believe in Jesus Christ
And I’m all set.

Then God’s wrath fizzles
Out and He forgives me
As I repent because
From him I’m sent.

I dust myself off I enjoy
And get back on the path
For boundless joy. Evil
Can’t win forever and
God I hold as my treasure.

And on the path I go.
The path of war,
The path of rages,
The path of sages.

The hope of love
Encompasses me,
Through death I die
And with my spirit I fly
To boundless joy
To my Father I enjoy.

On the path I go.
The path of ages,
A path that ends
When it’s just beginning,
And soaring to God
There is no better winning.


Scheme AABXB CXCDXEXX XFXX AXXXX GXHH BFEEAA GXXIDI
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 11011101 11101101 010110110 111 11111 01111 011111 011111 10110 10111 010101 0111 11110 101011 110101 1111 1111101 011101 110110 110100 1111110 010111 0111 01110 01110 0111 01001 1111 0111011 1101 1110101 10111 01110 0111 111010 01011 1111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 847
Words 196
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 4, 5, 4, 6, 6
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on July 19, 2023

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. His commitment to his Catholic faith and his work is inspiring. His interests include writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He enjoys reading a wide range of genres, including poetry, fantasy, science fiction, Catholic books, writer/author biographies, writing tips, self-help, and fiction. Ronald’s life and work are deeply influenced by his religion, his love for writing, and his dedication to his craft. His journey as a self-published author who writes six days a week, copywrites, drafts, edits, and advertises his own work is commendable. His personal life, including his volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, his devotion to God, and his love for pizza and cats, adds a unique touch to his identity as a writer. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace, Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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