Analysis of Tequila or Chasing the Worm

Jeremy S. Turner 1980 (Mountain View, Arkansas)



Tequila or Chasing the Worm

I’m chasing the worm tonight, mother,
That voracious monster lurking inside
The honey and heart,
Waiting to borrow through intestinal parts
Leaving a labyrinth of bloody tissue.

Issue me a Papal pardon
Else liver and heart both will harden.
Grant me amnesty from this pain
Else the merry-go will round again.

Spin the deadly die and record my score.
Tally the poisoned pipped tears of my pores.
Tiger the rings of carnival fire and
Jump the hopes of hellish desire
And thus burn belly with water and woe.

Go forth, my friend, and let me drown!
Tickle my throat and wiggle on down.
Amber you’ll leave and acid you’ll find,
Secreting a line of numbing slime behind.


Scheme X AXXXX BBXX XXXAX CCDD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 01011001 110010110 1010101001 01001 1011101001 100101101 10101010 110011110 11100111 101011101 1010100111 1001011111 10011100100 101110010 0111011001 11110111 101101011 101101011 101110101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 705
Words 139
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I was in college. It came to me while I was using alcohol to numb the pain of coming out to my unaccepting mother.

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Written on February 14, 2002

Submitted by jeremyt.40101 on June 15, 2023

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Jeremy S. Turner

I am a forty-three year old gay man with degrees in English Literature and Theatre. I live in rural Arkansas near the town of Mountain View. I live life for my beautiful nieces and nephews and my cat. more…

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