Analysis of Quiet Walk



We went for a walk,
A walk with no talk.
We saw a door,
A door with no lock.


Scheme AABC
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 01111 1101 01111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 76
Words 22
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

I wrote this poem in 2005 for my high school english class. Our teacher had us walk around the outside of the building, without saying any words. When we passed the administration entrance to the building our teacher decided to check the door to see if it was open. He did this because the administration was always harping about keeping the doors to the building shut and locked. Our homework that night was to write a short poem about our walk. This is what I wrote, and read aloud for the class. I got an 'A' on the poem and even was asked to read it again as an encore. 

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Written on April 28, 2005

Submitted by Stephen11harvey1986 on June 10, 2023

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