Analysis of Oldest profession



       Oldest profession
Her lipsticks a little smeared
Eyeliners not on quite straight
The clients they don't notice
They just take you in the back
Load you up with their dirty seed
Hopeful of a discount for cash
Hopeful  for a kind word even
You barely notice the pounding
As they take you on that motel mattress
You're busy doing the math
Rent and utilities you'll pay
A little something for the arm
A taste that burns going in
Feels hot then warm then peaceful
It keeps you in this game
It dulls the slaps your old man delivers
Deafens the name calling
As the bum rides your gravy train
You've heard it all from the like
Throughout the ages
It comes with the job description
Plus the occasional medical prescription

R P Edwards


Scheme AXXBXXXCDBXXXCXXXDXXXAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 10010 010101 11111 0101110 1111001 11111101 10100111 10101110 11010010 1111110110 1101001 10010011 01010101 0111100 1111110 111011 1101111010 10110 10111101 1111101 01010 11101010 100100100010 1110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 769
Words 138
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 294
Words per stanza (avg) 67

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The things men and women may do when they are pressed for a penny and need to ease their unbearable loneliness

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Written on June 21, 2023

Submitted by royboyjogger on June 20, 2023

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R P Edwards

Not much to tell. Like every human being I have stories to tell. Hopefully they help people appreciate this wonderful life we are gifted and hopefully the words I write can be helpful to people and bring a measure of peace to their lives. That's what I'm aiming for. Maybe I'll find fame and fortune along the way. Ha ha ha. more…

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