Analysis of I smell a rat

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



I am waiting for the hit.
I can see through all their shit.

Wasn't that long ago
Gas was all the go.

Solars on its way,
Or so they say.

The push over here is on,
All electric!
That's their song.

Rebates to change from gas,
Smart meters will supply the cash...

Cash can't be used,
Consolidation brings abuse.

So let's wait and see,
How they shaft us
With electricity.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1111111 101101 11101 1111 1111 0110111 1010 111 11111 11010101 1111 0010101 11101 1111 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 376
Words 90
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Written on July 06, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on July 06, 2023

Modified by myway6119 on July 06, 2023

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