Analysis of Drown In Obsession



My eyes flutter open

Few droplet of water sat on my lashes

I felt a dull pain in my heart

Although where do i stand?

My love fade for you

The plummeting of my grieving heart

Seek you dearly

How i wonder why you never see my love for you

How i wish you look me in the eyes

I know that no matter where i stand

I will be right beside you

I will wait for your love to be showered on me

My love, Please do cherish me

For i will give you my love

But can you fill the hole in my heart

Can you not spread your happiness inside me

Let me be your other half........


Scheme X X A B C A D C X B C D D X A D X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 11011011110 11011011 11111 11111 010011101 1110 1110111011111 111111001 111110111 1111011 111111111011 1111101 1111111 111101011 11111100011 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 593
Words 141
Sentences 3
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

When writing this poem.....word cannot express how one pour out their love to one another. It's like waiting for your other half or soulmate. It's also express how one feel depressed that he/she is not receiving that love back but obsessed with pain.

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Written on May 30, 2023

Submitted by anitaomorebokhae on July 05, 2023

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