Analysis of Marked life



" Marked life"

I care when I'm blue sometimes in life we have no idea what to do,only wake up and continue the patterns of every day life, despite some are living in  trauma, days that I still want my mama, sometimes I think I would be better in her arms all due to my child hood trauma.

Life gets the best of me I believe this is a test for me.
I'm ready to leave this life someday.
 I accept death I want to leave loveable memories for those I care for.
After life I will leave my mark.

"Leave your mark, your story will be told...
-Lenamarie Clark-


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111101011110101111100100101100110111100101111111001111111000111111110 110111101110111 11011111 10111111110011111 10111111 111110111 11
Characters 554
Words 120
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

I wrote this because I want to leave my mark in this world and this poem says it all.

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Written on June 16, 2023

Submitted by PoetFeather on June 16, 2023

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Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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