Analysis of Sorrow

QBit 1982 (Paderborn)



Ocean of Light full of dark Stars
I open my heart to you
I can`t percieve you anymore
you died
Let Light and Darkness be in balance
The Light of Darkness is unite with the cosmos
Let the Cosmos of Light be mercyful and mild
and transcend the Ashes, the Water, the Gases, the Earth and the fires and the living and dead Bloods nand Creatures into Spirit beyond violence
Enlighten the ones who can`t and can`t ever be Illuminated and save all best and worst worlds
save recognition and awareness and perception and freedom Anarchy and Order and forgivnes
Let Life be unite with the ones who can`t forgive and
teach them to forgive what they can`t ever forgive
Let Brilliance flow over ALL Worlds and Illuminate the Ones who can`t be brilliant unite everything with Technology for an eternal Contract of Peace
 of the Minds and the Hearts of Life!
and let everything flow for eternity
Save all Ideas the good and the bad  and transcend them to  the Matter of Light! and let get anything destroyed what deserves to be destroyed   to transcend it to something better and let anything stand as it is, the Gods of the Gods may purify everything and let the Wishes of Impossibilty come true .. anybody who wishes the Impossible deserves the Impossible and the Excitement and even Euphory
break all forbidness and bad consciences into forgiveness, let sorrow lead to life by Magic and the Illusion of death win Life again aknd stand honest uprigt and candid and enlighten the Deviils inside the hearts beyond Agony and Suffocation and the Abuse of Love to destroy Nature


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Characters 1,563
Words 278
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 75
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,272
Words per stanza (avg) 280

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The Sorrow of the Universe demand a fierce Response!

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Written on June 15, 2023

Submitted by icarospc on June 15, 2023

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