Analysis of You are the promise of the future we bring

Aldo Gabbay 1964 (sap paulo)



You are the promise of the future we bring
Waving the banner of love to all
I am the world of the restless and young
But the restless world never sleeps
And you sleep through the nigh
She crossed that long road
Hopping to find somebody that she knew waiting
For her on the other side of that lonely road
The dark sky brings tears to her eyes
The cold weather outside make her shiver
Today will end soon
But tomorrow will be another day


Scheme ABCDEFAFGHIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101011 100101111 1101101001 10101101 011101 11111 10111011110 101010111101 01111101 0110111010 01111 101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 435
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 351
Words per stanza (avg) 85

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