Analysis of The disease of Me"ism

_fiyas_ 2006 (kerala)



No for what my tears flow here
Why for blabbers in sea near
Then also for to put down the head
Under the pillow night in the bed

Abolish mumbled when am there
From the chorus is for the case?
Word which I layed mostly I downed
May from the mouth who to me friend

Hm! The right to borrow but on no
Reasoned case from me to know
Drama rip the loved one monopoly
In my heart blood became grownfully

The only one is the reasoned for me
Third eyed crueled enemy
Notice the some loosed unpositive
For what? Any for overhauled negative

I tired…..seriously am tired on life
According to me hearts swings on knife
Thank god for give me brave
And am asking for grow

From blind to light
For a cleared eye to sight
Lastly, am writing with tears
For a good not asking a day but seconds!


Scheme XXAA XXXX BBCC CCDD DDDB EEXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111111 111011 110111101 100101001 01010111 10101101 11111011 11011111 10111111 1011111 1010110100 0111011 0101101011 111100 100111 1110110100 110100011011 010111111 111111 011011 1111 101111 1011011 10111001110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 793
Words 172
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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this is the poem which I wrote in my frustration that is main reason to complete this smoothly

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Written on May 14, 2023

Submitted by _fiyas_ on May 14, 2023

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