Analysis of GOOD-BYE?



They jump from star to star
Earnestly searching every crowded universe,
For that indescribable, unattainable glow.
How will I know?
How, will, I know?
Will it blind me?
Will my heart burst?
Will it kill me?
No matter what, the search continues.
Consequence's can thrust me through,
Consequence's can leave me un-furrowed.
Continue our travels?
Continue our quest?
Or should we fear beauty, during wrest?
Losing time strikes fear for eternity,
Our time ends broken hearts,
For the inconsolable solemnity searcher,
When bonds are minced to ashes,
Seeker's cry, seeker's remain torpid,
Struck unknowingly from behind, but
Heal deserving hearts with magical vapors.
Again, a flower springs beauty,
Out glowing all others.
Amazingly one's garden becomes fertile again,
Strikingly the world shines again.
Is this the end of their travels?
Does strength become massive?
Beauty kills, but the traveler awakes stronger.
Ending each exhaustive journey,
Only to release back to time, for all time.
For another fortunate, smote searcher!
Will glow, way beyond, the same as mine.
And polish their own star,
"We captured time, do we say GOODBYE?"


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111 100101001010 11010001001 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 110101010 11111 1111110 0101010 010101 111110101 1011110100 1011101 101010010 1111110 101100110 101001011 10101110010 01010110 110110 0100110011001 10001101 11011110 110110 10110100110 10101010 10101111111 1010100110 111010111 010111 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,132
Words 211
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 900
Words per stanza (avg) 179

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Written on February 12, 2023

Submitted by mayonde on May 27, 2023

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