Analysis of Different dreams and different destiny but one love.



Lonely again, broken heart, swollen eyes and tired to stare.
I was wrapped in emotions of hopeless faith, dark and silent, but the pain from the sores on heart hurts badly.

To love, I thought was a beautiful investment,
when I gave my heart out without replacement.
I wasn't scared, though I don't have a pair.
And now it was broken beyond repair.

I tried to avoid being lonely, so I fell in love,
but now I am alone all the time feeling the pain of love.

I couldn't blame the destiny from being different, it has to take its cause.

Different dreams and different destiny but one love.

I'm a poor rat, detached from normality,
but your parents were heirs with popularity.
At school, you were the top notch,
But I'm a dullard who knew nothing about lunch.
You could read and you Sabi book die....
But could sing and I Sabi write rhymes

Different dreams and different destiny but one love

You finish school and went to university
But I am in the street following my destiny.

You badges degree and you were dragged by big companies,
I dey sing and my followers are keeping my company.

Different dreams and different destiny but one.

But I'm holding on to my phone, waiting for your call or your text.
cuz I'm missing you


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,228
Words 254
Sentences 16
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 2, 1, 1, 6, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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It's about two lovers with different dreams and destiny

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by samvoiceless on May 08, 2023

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