Analysis of My Angel Love Baby

SparkandHaze 1980 (Philippines)



Terrified, I was inside a bubble of pain
And as I took another gasp of air, calm remains
Breathless and anxious were feelings within
The sound of my silent roar echoes in spaces between

And on the 12th hour, you made a whisper
Your whisper turned to cries with tears glitter Unexplained bliss streamed through my handmade cradle
You are here, I am holding on to you, my little angel.

Your hands soft as cotton, cheeks melt like cream
I am awake but my spirits floating like a dream
Your eyes mesmerizes as they gaze upon my humble face
This is a memory I never want to replace

As I held you next to my heart, i felt the touch
You spoke to me without words, but meant so much
The marvel of life, is this moment of promise
That a love with no limit truly exist.


Scheme XXXX XAA BBCC DDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110101011 0111010111101 1001001001 01111011001001 010111011010 11011111100111111110 111111011111010 1111101111 1101111010101 111111011101 110100110111 111111111101 11110111111 010111110110 10111101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 762
Words 151
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

This poem was written for my daughter, remembering the pain and unexplained bliss of welcoming her to this world.

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Written on April 13, 2023

Submitted by SparkandHaze on June 04, 2023

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SparkandHaze

She lives in the Philippines, working as an executive in a technology company but continues to live the passion of writing poetry since her school days 20 years ago. She takes inspiration from her own experiences, books she reads and just about anything on love, mental health, passion, survival. She shares her poetry as Spark and Haze in her social media. more…

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