Analysis of Happiness - Part 2



Me and most love were
sunbathing naked in her backyard.
I was bored out of my mind
couldn't lay still,
she stone-like sponge soaking
up the sun for energy.
20 minutes later she said
give me one hard and fast.
I put my head down.
No she said maybe tomorrow,
she comes over kisses me and says "Anytime Big Shot".
She lays down and rattles off 5 or 6.
I'm in the house watching tapes clothes on,
and 2 hours later, she enters the house nude,
she gets dressed and goes off to work.
I roll my eyes, really.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOF
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1010001 1111111 1011 111110 1011100 101011 111101 11111 1111001 1110101011011 11101011 100110111 01010110011 11101111 111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 501
Words 110
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 384
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Written on May 23, 2023

Submitted on May 24, 2023

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