Analysis of Unhappy



Why does it matter anymore?
Why do I care?
I am not made to live this life
I am just so unhappy all the time!
People always judging and treating me like shit
I'm just so over all of it
No one cares about me
Yet my hearts as big as gold
I'd give you the shirt off my back
Yet you can't even give me a hello
I'm always running, always stressed
I don't have the energy to put up with this
Maybe my time has already passed
I missed the moment, slipped by to fast
Now I'm stuck being miserable
Faking a smile every day
Playing on my phone just to keep the tears away
If I distract myself from all the pain and the constant tease
Then maybe I can make it through another day


Scheme ABCDEEFGHIJKLLMNNON
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001 1111 11111111 1111010101 10110010111 11110111 111011 1111111 11101111 1111011001 111011 111010011111 101110101 110101111 111101000 10011001 101111110101 11011110100101 110111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 669
Words 142
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 520
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by Dcristiano0513 on May 24, 2023

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