Analysis of IM STILL ME



IM STILL ME

Nothing can faze me,
 I'm already crazy.
They call me unbreakable,
for anything I'm capable.
 Wearing my heart on my sleeve.
 Best if you just believe.
Be weary,
when coming near me,
 See how we all are deceived.
 It's so disgusting.
You'rer completely rusting.
Are you sure, your not her,
 from that movie the ring.
 Twisted bitch of a judge with that funky DA,
 You too looking like the grudge better watch what you say,
that public pertender,
can't even remember,
 What you said today.
unless your names slever.
 You're all not so clever. if your not a demon,
Your all not so clever.
If your not a demon
they wont let you win.
You're not one of them.
 Where have you been.
you gotta see the signs watch your front, back and behind.
fight alone, write your book.
You talk, and your life will get toOK.
You're nothing but paper, SO Get your head out your ass,
BEFORE THEY BUTT RAPE YOU. Understand their game.
They want you to blame.
Can't run, can't hide, or say goodbye.
 All up in your shit.
Even have to watch where you sit.
Stand your ground.
Watch your sound,
Understand my words.
Fuck what you heard.
Come up with a plan.
They come to shake,
 bite off your hand.
Dont think your free,
You gotta think like me.
Otherwise your fucked, and your old man has his dick being sucked,
But Not by you,
Because he's sick too.
Like them dame hoes,
What do you know,
he's playing you too.
This sick ass world,
Grass ain't always green.
Smiles are not what they seam.
Don't lose yourself to them.
 Can't let them win.
 We all make mistakes.
 God forgive us for our sins.
  As long as we stay real.
Disconnect from the fake.
 Before you get bit by the wrong snake.
Just Keep moving, keep it real.
Trust me, unless you want it today for your last meal.
Open your eyes you gotta see.
Still after everything,
I'm still me.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 111 10111 101010 1110100 1101100 1011111 111101 110 11011 1111101 11010 101010 111110 111001 10110111101 1110101101111 1101 110010 11101 01111 111110111010 111110 111010 11111 11111 1111 1101011111001 101111 11011111 1101101111111 0111110111 11111 1111111 11011 10111111 111 111 0111 1111 11101 1111 1111 1111 110111 10110111111101 1111 01111 1111 1111 11011 1111 1111 111111 110111 1111 11101 10111101 111111 001101 011111011 1110111 1101111011111 10111101 11010 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,844
Words 403
Sentences 45
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 64
Lines Amount 65
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 688
Words per stanza (avg) 170

About this poem

The system is cyrupted, Many life's have been enterupted. You go down for almost nothing, Making nothing outta something. No freedom, all rights are taken. After everything is gone,then your awaken. Never letting the world change you. Stay you stay true.

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Written on April 12, 2023

Submitted by susanne_g on May 15, 2023

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Susanne Grill

Im a Victim survivor. Had very hard life. Been drug through the mud and into many storms, I'm a very strong leader with a big heart. A mother of three handsome boys, I've been writing since I was eleven years old. When I Write, it pours out fast. This is they way I heal. more…

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