Analysis of Some Excerpt Of Sibling Rivalry

Jerry Wayne Lawrence, Jr. 1978 (Baton Rouge, Louisiana)



Angry. Suddenly Angry @ The Closer Family. The Friction 2 Come.
Glum: Missing Each Other.
Laughter Over The Despair Of The Other.
Mother & Father, Far Out Of The Particular Affair.
Clear The Air: Who 1st?
Trust Violated, The Other Hated.
Complicated Has Cornered Simplicity.
Family. The Closest Family, So Distant.
Hurt, Is The Constant, Here 2 Haunt.
Hurt Hurts. Why Bother Ever Again?
Regain Focus: The Best Part Of Family, Also, Disapproves Of This...Some Excerpt Of Sibling Rivalry.


Scheme ABBCDEFGHIF
Poetic Form
Metre 10100100101000101 110110 10100011010 10101110010001 10111 1100001010 1001100100 100010100110 1101011 111101001 01100111100100011110110100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 486
Words 90
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 378
Words per stanza (avg) 79

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A Ode 2 Our Closest Sisters & Brothers, My Friends.

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by jerrywlawrence2666 on May 10, 2023

Modified by jerrywlawrence2666 on May 10, 2023

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