Analysis of Lord Help Me



Lord help me as I go through this pain,
My tears are pouring like the rain.
Losing my mother I cannot take,
My heart everyday breaks.
She was a wonderful caring woman,
She had a heart like the sun.
She had so much love in her soul,
Her love ran over like milk in a bowl.
Now she is in heaven above,
I am going to miss her love.
Now that she has gone away,
I will miss her every day.
I will sing a song,
Momma did no wrong.
Lord help me as I go through this pain,
My tears are pouring like the rain.

By: Johanna Eve Tyrrell McFadden
May 3, 2023


Scheme AAxxbbccddeeffAA be
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 11110101 101101101 111011 1101001010 1101101 11111001 0111011001 11101001 11101101 1111101 11101001 11101 10111 111111111 11110101 101011010 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 545
Words 131
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 206
Words per stanza (avg) 57

About this poem

My mom was seventy-seven when she passed away and I've written a poem in her honor as a mother.

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Written on May 03, 2023

Submitted by johannamcfadden219 on May 10, 2023

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