Analysis of The Cosmic Tryst
Jason Dan Bailey aka Jaso D Bai 1972 (Klamath falls Oregon)
An island stands upon her shoulders
Breathing flames and throwing boulders
Weaving from her loom her gold molten locks
Stitching land to sea with black porous rocks
Where wisps of perfume dance upon a field of waves
Beneath such cause and affection the kraken misbehaves
As from the deep her song emanates
Violently shifting tectonic plates
While morning's dawn gives Chase to a full moon setting just beyond the valley mist
Concealing within her diaphanous gown the romantic rendezvous of their Cosmic tryst
-Jaso D Bai
March 7th 2023
| Scheme | AA BB CC DD EE X X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 110101010 10101010 1010101101 1011111101 111011010111 011100100101 110101100 1000100101 1101111011101010101 0100100100100101011101 1011 111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 562 |
| Words | 96 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 64 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem on my last birthday on March 7th 2023. It speaks of the love affair between the Sun and the Moon as seen from the Earth.
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