Analysis of Pouring Day

Sherlene Clave 2000 (Makati City)



A lovely weather happens to be a sad one. Pouring it's sweat all over the place.
 Mixed emotions embraced her and sympathy is awakened.
 It wasn't easy yet she overcomes it.
 The path that she choose wasn't as good as she thought.
Realizing how it ends up that way brings anxiety and darkness to her.
 How life sucks to her, how unlucky of her.

In life that is full of negativity, look for a positive one.
No one will fight for you but your own. It's hard, but at least you've tried.
Try and try until one day you'll succeed.

Be wary of those people who wanted to get you down.
Don't rely onto others, instead rely on your own.
No one will go for you except of your own. Your trust for yourself, don't let it go down.


Scheme XXXXAA XXX BXB
Poetic Form
Metre 010101011011101111001 101001001001010 1101011101 011111011111 1001111111010001010 11110101010 01111101001101001 1111111111111111 1010111101 11011101101111 10110100101111 111111011111110111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 725
Words 152
Sentences 15
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Written on August 21, 2022

Submitted by clave_s on April 11, 2023

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