Analysis of I'm learning



I have lost my mind, but I was lost all along,
So much pressure on my spine, feeling like I should be gone,
Pain courses through my veins, at the worst it irritates my brain,
A deep fire inside my name, thou who is me, for my life I have no shame,
Let there be Peace to all and peace to me, learn from life, walk forward,  very silently.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111101 11101111011111 11011110111011 0110011111111111111 111111011111111010100
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 337
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 255
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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Writing these poems helps with my own internal struggles

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Written on April 26, 2023

Submitted by robertsladerichey on April 26, 2023

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