Analysis of Taking chances
Darken skies that seem at a time like never-ending...
I've never thought of seeing sunnier days again
They say love is blind and after experiencing myself... it's true
Only when the tears are all dried up and realizing it happened to you
You wonder if someday this overwhelming pain will ever go away...
Lost in a whirlwind of darkness you somehow just lost your way
Then when you think all hope is gone and fading into the blight...
Along comes someone new to shine some energy onto your dimming light
Hesitant at first you wonder if this moment is legit or another snatcher of souls...
Time goes by an instant with this person the broken pieces are finally becoming whole
You're feeling and experiencing emotions that were once lost and re-discovered
Trying to close your eyes and open them up again to see if the dream is over
To be taken back to a place with your spirit renewed with this chance encounter
Afraid to be hurt again but you want to experience the joy of being this person's lover
A breath of relief but there are no promises made yet for tomorrow
Everything can be gone in the blink of an eye for that is the end of the show
Never take anything for granted because in life you may never know
So I'll enjoy the times spent together; let fate decide and go with the flow
Hoping that every day can be lived for a moment like this
To enjoy that person's touch, embrace and savor every kiss.
Scheme | XXAA BBCC XXXD DDEE EEFF |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) |
Metre | 1011110111010 11011101101 1111101001000111 101011111010011011 1101110101110101 1001110111111 111111110100101 01111111100101101 10011110111011010101011 11111011100101011000101 110001000010101101010 101111010110111101110 11101101111001111010 0111101111101000111011010 01101111110011101 1011100111111101101 10110110010111101 110101101011101101 1011001111101011 1011101010101001 |
Characters | 1,414 |
Words | 271 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 56 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 224 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
About this poem
New love New encounter New memories stories to tell...
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Written on May 03, 2023
Submitted by edilions on May 03, 2023
Modified on May 03, 2023
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