Analysis of Sands

Miranda rice 1997 (Spring valley)



White almost beige
Some even form a land
All have critters and crabs and more to add
Never be sad when your feet are in the sand
As it may form you a piece of land
Land so magical it keeps you above
The waters that flows
So below
Shells to follow, to lead the path
A mermaid would only follow
It’s never to late to leave the shallows
Every grain
Gives you sense of being sane
Every little piece
So hot So light in weight
Gathered and scattered
No nothings the matter
I’ve never been less sadder
My toes are in the sand
That’s the plan
Never leaving the sand


Scheme ABCBBDEFGFEHHIJKLLBMB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 110101 1110010111 10111111001 111110111 1110011101 01011 101 11101101 0111010 110111101 1001 1111101 100101 111101 10010 110010 1101110 111001 101 101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 578
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 443
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

About how sand is a huge part of the beach and how the beach can reflect on you!

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Written on June 11, 2021

Submitted by Mrs.mirandarice22 on May 02, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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