Analysis of Pained heart

Tristen 2002 (United States)



A bittersweet taste arrives with the thought of you.
Of the pleasant memories, and happy times,
the way my heart would race at your every smile,
memories now tarnished by the pain of your rejection.
Now I lay while empty thoughts roam my head,
my heart burns from the yearn for you,
and I dismay that it wasn't I you chose, but him.


Scheme ABCDEAF
Poetic Form
Metre 01010110111 10101000101 011111111001 10011010111010 1111101111 11110111 0101111011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 332
Words 69
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 260
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Written on April 17, 2023

Submitted by RC430 on May 01, 2023

Modified on May 01, 2023

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