Analysis of Love With Nowhere To Go

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Love With Nowhere To Go

Grief is love with no where to go
Coming face to face all of a sudden
The irrefutable evidence
Feelings, moments
And memories
Suddenly vanish in form
No longer manifested
Ashes, smoke and dust
Disappear and take their leave
And we are what remains.

Your name bears a face no more
Tears pour in place of laughter
Times shared and apart
Ache in your absence
Embraces barely echo you
Still I remain stubborn
Not holding onto you
But what the cold can’t deny
Your spirit burning
A blazing fire of you in my heart!

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Scheme A AXBXXXXXXX XCDBEXEXXD XC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111111 1011111010 000100100 1010 0100 1001001 110100 10101 010111 011101 1110111 1101110 11001 10110 01010101 110110 110101 1101101 11010 0101011011 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 801
Words 150
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 10, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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Grieving over a loss of a loved one

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Written on April 29, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on April 29, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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