Analysis of ABANDONED LIMOUSINE



UNWRAPPED    WRAPPINGS
A    DISCARDED   BLUE   LIMOUSINE
BALD  TYRES
LEAKING   GASOLINE

AN    EMPTY   GAS   CYLINDER    ATTACHED  TO  
A   WARE HOUSE  WALL

CONCRETE   BLOCKED   WINDOWS
UNLOCKED   DOORS

BROKEN   GAS  LAMPS

A     SHATTERED    WINSCREEN
LOOSE   PACKETS   OF   HEROIN ON  THE   BACK   SEAT

THE    DRIVER  AND   A   PASSENGER    SLUMPED   INFRONT
NO  MOVEMENT  IN    THEIR    BREATH

IN    THE    BOOT   A   YOUNG   GIRL
HER     BODY   TIED      IN    TAPE

BARELY   ALIVE
A   BULLET   IN    HER   HEAD    RESIDES   SILENTLY

UNABLE  TO  SPEAK  SHE  NODS
KNOWING  SHE  IS   LUCKY  TO  HAVE   SURVIVED   


Scheme ABAB CX AA A BX CX XX XX AX
Poetic Form
Metre 011 0010110 11 1010 1101100011 0111 01110 011 1011 0101 11011001011 0100010011 110011 001011 010101 1001 01000101100 0101111 1011101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 620
Words 92
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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ABANDONED LIMOUSINE IN A BACK STREET ALLEY

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Written on April 27, 2023

Submitted by ryraynard on April 27, 2023

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