Analysis of Gone from me

John Coss 1987 (ohio)



Gone from me

The ocean is blue.
The grass is green.
The blood is boiling inside of me.
thought of you is not what I seek.

I'm here all alone.
with no one to talk to
I still think about you.
Many years have passed I still think about you that won't last.

I'm wondering what went so wrong.
that you thought it be better to be alone
it doesn't seem fair it doesn't seem right.
but in the end, I'm sleeping alone at night.

I hope you're happy so far above.
Just remember I gave you all my love.
seeing is believing fate is so weak
So, I want to stop all the memories and delete them because right now they seem so bleak.


Scheme A BXAC DBBX XDEE FFCC
Poetic Form
Metre 111 01011 0111 011100111 11111111 11101 111111 111011 10111111011111 11001111 11111101101 1101111011 10011100111 111101101 1010111111 1010101111 1111110100001101111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 621
Words 141
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

just thinking of someone who I used to love

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Written on April 17, 2023

Submitted by johnc.18136 on April 17, 2023

Modified on April 17, 2023

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John Coss

35 year old man, I use to write years ago and just started again. more…

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