Analysis of If life were right!
What is sleep?
If nightmares are dreams!
Yet, what is love if it goes away without a hug!
Yet, what are spaces, if they blank out your mind as if you also do not have a heart!
What is basic if everything you've ever had is gone and shared with all others until the point you have nothing you even want!
What is keeping as if it were yours in the first place!
Why say this?
Yet, because what is sacred when you betrayed me is the only words she left on your go away list!
Money, yea, dummy I have a lot of it I wish I was saying!
Since you wanted to hear it there you go!
Why should it matter when all people do is take it!
At least one day maybe my life will not be waisted!
I'm not referring to drugs I'm referring to love mine was mistaken and hated!
I'm done please this time no face lift!
As if anyone cares I almost died jumping off the latter while cleaning gutters just to try to have an extra dollar!
Life to me, is hainous!
No one cared so now you can applause each other the way you say it!
Any more some do not want to love me thank you exactly for the way you explained it!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 1111 1111111010101 111101111111111011101 1110110110111011110010111101101 1110111010011 111 1011110110111010111111011 10110110111111110 1110111111 1111011101111 111110111111 110101110101111010010 11111111 11101111101010110101111111010 11111 11111110111001111 1011111111110101011011 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,097 |
Words | 240 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 46 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 834 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 223 |
About this poem
Short poem just explaining my thoughts!
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Written on April 15, 2023
Submitted by devonb.14033 on April 15, 2023
Modified on April 15, 2023
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