Analysis of D.A.P.

Tatiana Castaneda 1987 (Los Angeles, CA)



It's God that I trust but in him that I love.
Six foot three & he loves everything about lil ole me.
Fell in love & it hasn't even been a week!
Does this make me gullible or just plain weak??
Unsure but reassured that with me is where he wanna be.
Checking anyone disrespecting, Could it be Mr. & Mrs. Porter?
Can't wait to scream "damn don't go so deep!"
Just to hear him say "naw move them hands baby"
As sweet as it seemed at first, yet it did turn out to be a dream.
Nothing he said was real nor did he mean.
Gullible & desperate to be loved that I almost accepted a demon.
One of Satan's foot solider ripping a piece of my heart that was left over.
No longer capable to trust myself in choosing a lifetime partner.
D.A.P I thank you for the lesson taught even The Devil was once God's angel.


Scheme ABCCBDEBFGHDDI
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101111 111111001111 10111010101 11111001111 01101111111101 1010010111101010 111111111 11111111110 1111111111111101 1011111111 10010111111010010 11111100111111110 1101001110100110 1111101011001011110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 797
Words 173
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 604
Words per stanza (avg) 159

About this poem

It was about someone I thought really wanted me.

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Written on April 02, 2023

Submitted by Queen_Invisible on April 13, 2023

Modified on April 13, 2023

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