Analysis of The boy who could’ve flown

Sandeep Konka 2004 (Hyderabad)



He used to be as bright as he was young,
Wanted to reach the sun with his wings yet unformed.
Once the time comes he always thought,
Then came time without a sound.
When it came he said he wasn’t enough,
That he couldn’t be a song but just a cog.
All the while his wings took form,
Made of gold and covered in flower.
How he could’ve flown he’ll never know,
Maybe that’s why he still seeks his song.
The boy who could’ve flown,
 But never felt his wings to take off.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 101101111101 1011111 1110101 111111101 1111011101 1011111 111010010 11111101 101111111 01111 110111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 478
Words 104
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 355
Words per stanza (avg) 93

About this poem

A poem about what could've been, of every dream that stayed a dream.

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Written on March 08, 2023

Submitted by knksndp on March 14, 2023

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