Analysis of POEM FOR MY WIFE



summer’s cool early evening,  filled glasses
of silver champagne, soft aroma of tobacco
mixed with fragrances from the garden --
red cigarette pack on the tablecloth or a pipe
bowl resting against an ashtray.  these, the
days leading to autumn and you, my dearest.

winter’s bleak evening trees, attenuated
fingers reaching up to grasp stars and the
blanched moon resting in the greenhouse --
heavy coat on the grass or fine lace
in the parlor reclining close to the fire.
these days ripened by your presence, my love.

spring’s black owl, night in the open air house,
courtyards where we read together
laudanum ramblings of Lord Byron or
Mary Shelley’s remarkable prose.  these days
gone in the feuding winds, in softness of
remembrance, in the fragility of endless love.


Scheme XXXXAX XABXCD BCXXDD
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010110 110011010101 111001010 10111010101 110011110 11011001110 1011010100 1010111100 1110001 101101111 001001011010 1110111011 1111001011 1111010 100111101 1010100111 1001010101 0100001001101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 780
Words 135
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

This poem was written remembering youth and how my wife and I began our relationship.

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Written on February 13, 2023

Submitted by rainydayrex on March 04, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Perry Thompson

The poet grew up in Atlanta and spent quite a bit of time at concerts and poetry readings. He now lives in South Carolina and passes time by watching movies with his wife of 35 years. more…

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