Analysis of Hurts



As I wake up iam feeling so scared
I just lay in bed waiting for
This bad guy to start with all his lies

Hurting me makes him feel powerful
He has all of the control know all he
Can do is rule.

As he pulls me out of bed  
The Hurt just begins.

Hurting me makes you feel better
But do you ever see what you
Are putting me threw or dose it even matter.

Hurting me you feel  better
But why do I not matter.

Hurt starts with  his hands why
Can't you just be a good man.

As I lay hear crying in pain yelling
For someone to help me.
then you got mad

why Can't you see how much you
Are hurting me.

You took everything from me
Iam feeling down for all you done.
You thought it was fun.

I have so much pain in my heart
For all you have done I can't live my life
Or seem to have fun.

My heart weighs so heavey
You took everything from me
I have nothing but my heavey heart.

I have marks I look at everyday it only
Reminds me of this painful time you
Wanted to play.

When you put your hands on me
You felt  so powerful .

You Hurt me so bad that I can not
Even mend do I matter to anyone
Or we'll I be worthless to everyone

You deserve to feel everything that
You made me feel hurt and every bit of
My pain.


Scheme xxx abx xx cdc cc xx xbx db Bee fxe bBf bdx ba xee xxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 111111011 11101101 111111111 101111100 1111001111 1111 1111111 01101 10111110 11110111 110111111010 1011110 1111110 111111 1111011 1111100110 11111 1111 1111111 1101 111011 11011111 11111 11111011 1111111111 11111 111110 111011 111011101 111111101110 011111011 1011 1111111 111100 111111111 1011110110 111110110 10111101 11111010011 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,231
Words 301
Sentences 14
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Everything I've been threw hurts so much sometimes I just don't want to hurt anymore bruises and I've been burnt by lite cigarettes that my ex put out on my body broken bones I just seem to have a shattered life and it hurts so bad.

Font size:
 

Written on March 11, 2023

Submitted by gwenb.35660 on March 11, 2023

1:31 min read
0

Discuss this Gwen burns ( grim) poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Hurts" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 21 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/156045/hurts>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    10
    days
    21
    hours
    30
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not _______ both
    A see
    B travel
    C follow
    D choose