Analysis of Hurts
Gwen burns ( grim) 1985 (Canton,ohio)
As I wake up iam feeling so scared
I just lay in bed waiting for
This bad guy to start with all his lies
Hurting me makes him feel powerful
He has all of the control know all he
Can do is rule.
As he pulls me out of bed
The Hurt just begins.
Hurting me makes you feel better
But do you ever see what you
Are putting me threw or dose it even matter.
Hurting me you feel better
But why do I not matter.
Hurt starts with his hands why
Can't you just be a good man.
As I lay hear crying in pain yelling
For someone to help me.
then you got mad
why Can't you see how much you
Are hurting me.
You took everything from me
Iam feeling down for all you done.
You thought it was fun.
I have so much pain in my heart
For all you have done I can't live my life
Or seem to have fun.
My heart weighs so heavey
You took everything from me
I have nothing but my heavey heart.
I have marks I look at everyday it only
Reminds me of this painful time you
Wanted to play.
When you put your hands on me
You felt so powerful .
You Hurt me so bad that I can not
Even mend do I matter to anyone
Or we'll I be worthless to everyone
You deserve to feel everything that
You made me feel hurt and every bit of
My pain.
Scheme | xxx abx xx cdc cc xx xbx db Bee fxe bBf bdx ba xee xxx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (35%) Etheree (23%) |
Metre | 111111011 11101101 111111111 101111100 1111001111 1111 1111111 01101 10111110 11110111 110111111010 1011110 1111110 111111 1111011 1111100110 11111 1111 1111111 1101 111011 11011111 11111 11111011 1111111111 11111 111110 111011 111011101 111111101110 011111011 1011 1111111 111100 111111111 1011110110 111110110 10111101 11111010011 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,231 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 40 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 61 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
About this poem
Everything I've been threw hurts so much sometimes I just don't want to hurt anymore bruises and I've been burnt by lite cigarettes that my ex put out on my body broken bones I just seem to have a shattered life and it hurts so bad.
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