Analysis of HOW DO I UNLOAD MY LOAD?
How do I unload my load, to let go of pain that's left untold?
Wanting to grab on to what's real.
Deal with the things I can truly deal with.
Once again I ask no-one can answer.
How do I even start to unload my load.
At times I go into a fit,with my mind in a scramble, trieng to talk it out
with someone,I can only ramble.
Putting my thoughts in order I have to do before I even start to do what I have to.
Strong and weak at the same time I feel as Im loosing my mind .
Knowing it's my strong hold,even if another don't see.
Good person,beautiful soul,I know I am,wondering why I feel as an helpless lamb. Pushing through a field of wolves.
A battle I keep fighting,picking up my pen as a sword and keep writing.
Fighting ,writing through the pain,finishing hopeing for change.Feelings of realness not fake.Love not hate.
Wanting to vanish from the road blocks time,anger,pain,frustration,fakeness,hate,and weight.
All ways find myself standing surronded by loud noisey.
I can't hear myself breath.
by Angela Whitehead
originally written:9-14-17 rewritten:3-13-23
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Metre | 1110111111111101 10111111 1101111011 1011111110 11110110111 1111010111001011111 1111010 10110101111011101111111 101101111111011 101111101011 111111111111011010111 0101111111010110 1010101111111111 10110101111 1111101111 11111 11001 0100010010 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,096 |
Words | 222 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 16, 2 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 46 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 416 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 94 |
About this poem
GOING THROUGH EMOTIONAL/LIFE STRUGGLES AND HOW I HANDLE THEM BY PUTTING MY FEELINGS ON PAPER.
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