Analysis of Gone but not far away



Here's a rose,I'm sending your way.

If your sad,And having a bad day.

Just call my name,and I'm always right there.

I know you can't see me,just know I'm always near.

I'm the beauty in the day,I'm the stars you see in the night sky.

I'm that whisper that you hear,on that cold winters night.

I'm the sun that shines upon your face,and the rain that runs down your cheeks.

I'm the wind that gives u a chill,and also cools you down yes that is me.

Even though you can't see me,
just know I'm never far away.

When u feel that warmth from the ☀ sun,Oh yes that is me again giving u a hug just like I always did.

So on those bad days know I'm right there,and I never stopped loving you even though I had to go away.

Written by:
                  Kelly ertell

Dedicated to:
                All our most loved ones        
                 That are gone to soon
                 You are all truly missed
                   And never forgotten


Scheme A A X X B X X C CA X A BX XXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011 11110011 11111111 1111111111 101000101110011 1110111011101 1011101110111111 10111101101111111 1011111 11110101 111111011111011010111111 1111111111101101101111101 101 101 10001 110111 11111 111101 010010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 989
Words 205
Sentences 12
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to my son who passed away 11 years ago and a very close friend we just lost recently I felt the message coming through to me from them I hope you like it

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Written on March 24, 2023

Submitted by kellye.83097 on March 24, 2023

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Kelly s ertell

I love to write poetry I stopped for along time after my son passed and went down a dark path but now finally I'm doing better and ready to put all my feelings into poetry more…

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