Analysis of Featuring Michael Ondaatje



Griffin calls to come and kiss him goodnight
I yell ok. Finish something I'm doing,
then something else, walk slowly round
the corner to my son's room.
He is standing arms outstretched
waiting for a bearhug. Grinning.

Why do I give my emotion an animal's name,
give it that dark squeeze of death?
This is the hug which collects
all his small bones and his warm neck against me.
The thin tough body under the pyjamas
locks to me like a magnet of blood.

How long was he standing there
like that, before I came?


Scheme XAXXXA BXCXCX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 101110111 11111010110 11011101 0101111 1110101 1010110 1111101011001 1111111 1101101 11110111011 011101001 111101011 1111101 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 542
Words 115
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on March 28, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 28, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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