Analysis of Your Craving Makes You Doubt



The jaded mind spasms with its presence, glee is with us but to meet that all recurring joy is pain appearing a gain, become a quirk. We struggle, caught. You lie upon my heart as on a roost, you can never know how crushed I am with having you ultimately upon my life. You pickle my freedom from its deserved squall rain.

In forgiveness your lift enervating get-up and-go. You know you have to converge some fortitude to make that step, and even when you think it’s for the best, you can’t help but feeling devastated and afraid of what’s coming next.  It’s the moment you understand you’re going to be his soul and lane.

It’s not that you can’t live solo, but you shudder some fact of no longer being able to  allot your life, the one you counted on during those challenging neither of us want to leave.

The best joys in your life at the same time the greatest pain you’ve seasoned. And all of a sudden you become a tizzy of emotions that take away that hysterical balance you had. Our cuddle lasted too long. We loved right down to the bone.

Redolent great times Life seems a little better, but wherever you go, there’s something that recall you of those moments you paid out together. Even when you know you were having so many obstacles and there were issues that driven you to make that decision, you just want to be together with that man you adore.


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About this poem

I wrote this poem on 22, December 2022. The poem about moments of being torn in love and getting back together every time doesn't seem like a bad idea.

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Submitted by Yousif on March 24, 2023

Modified by Yousif on April 07, 2023

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Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker

Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla was born on 9th of March 1986 in Khartoum - Sudan. People always call me (Shakespeare) he went to University of Juba- School of Arts and Humanities- Departmentof English Language. He works as a TEFL teacher and IELTS/TOEFL preparation trainer, Freelance interperter / Translator, and Poet. Provided Arabic to English Translation, proofreading, editing, interperted multiple in person interview and workshops for the documentary. Highly acquainted with. political. economical, legal documents, technical phraseology to ensure correct Translation Reviewed and Translation of books. He is inspired poet from the country of exquisite natural beauty, ancient historical attractions and inhabitants well versed in the art of hospitality in central Africa beloved Sudan. He is fond of poetry writing about life and whole thing that happen to human kind, either good or bad. He has got the collection of poems that he writes in various issues: socio-cultural, lamentation, lyrical, narrative, political, love, friendship, pain, especial events of my life, , etc and environmental as well, he always publishes many articles and poems on Sindh Courier is an online news service in Karachi, Pakistan. He had have been worked as a debate leader discussing various topics in many English Institutes, centers, academy and schools over 10 years, and sometimes he helps foreigners who come to visit our state to work with them as a translator or trip guider also, he helps international business people communicate more effectively and comfortably in British English. He does this virtually as non a native speaker, he supports people gain the confidence needed to improve and master accent management is key to intelligibility and thus pronunciation training has become a primary focus of his personalized sessions. He focuses on helping my clients learn how english language system works and then how to put it into action with relevant vocabulary, correct pronunciation. He also can be reached at: americanslang64@gmail.com more…

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