Analysis of LIVING

RAYNARD 1958 (HOSPITAL)



NINE  INCH  NAILS
I  HANG  FROM  THE  CEILING  LIKE  A  DISPLACED  BAT
MY  WINGS  HAVE  BEEN  CLIPPED
EACH  LIMB    DISCONNECTED

BLOOD   STAINED  BODY
NAKED  TO  THE  BONE

I SIT
DROWNING  IN  MY  OWN  URINE
STIRRING EACH  FORGOTTEN  MEMORY
DERAILED AND  DISCARDED  BY  SOCIETY

MY  MIND  HAS  BEEN  ALTERED AS HAS  MY  NAME
EACH  STEP  I  TAKE  IS  NOT   THE   SAME

DEATH IS  CLOSE  AS  ARE  YOU

UNOPENED    LETTERS    RESIDE   IN  MY  MIND
FILLED    WITH   UNKINDNESS
UNABLE  TO  REWIND

THE  LIGHTS  IN  THE  ROOM  HAVE  DARKENED
I    AM  NO  LONGER    ANGRY

AT   REST   I  AM    WITH    THE   ANGELS


Scheme AXXX BX XXBB CC X DAD XB X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101010011 11111 11010 1110 10101 11 1001110 101010100 01001010100 1111101111 11111101 111111 0101001011 111 010110 01001110 1111010 11111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 610
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 2, 1, 3, 2, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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LIVING

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Written on March 15, 2023

Submitted by rayo.x on March 15, 2023

Modified on April 07, 2023

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