Analysis of Everything you touched

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I want to be everything you touched
The crumbling walls you lean upon
The things you hold tightly on to
The people you brush past without remorse
The embers of stick you prod into the fire
The past loves you called liars
I want to be the grass on which you run
The dance floor you spin upon
The remote controls you explore
The pets and children you adore
I want to be the pillow that catches your dreams
And the windows from which you long to break free
To be the clothes that you choose so carefully
Or the food that moves you so happily
I want to be everything you touch
And for you to love me so so much


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 010011101 01111011 0101110101 010111101010 0111110 1111011111 0111101 00101101 01010101 111101011011 00101111111 11011111100 1011111100 11111011 011111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 606
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 485
Words per stanza (avg) 122
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Written on March 12, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 12, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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