Analysis of Down in room 365



Down in room 365 lives a man and a women
The women who is pregnant
She lives for herself
The man who drinks
He's cruel to her

Down in room 365 it's dark and cold
No life
No breathing
Only blood
Only tears
A mother lives but a child dies

Down in room 365 it reeks of blood
The mother walks faraway
Blood of her child on her hands
A husband lays cold on pavement
Its like a maze

Down in room 365 no one survives
But a mother lives through blood
How did she live
How could she
With the blood of her child on her hands?


Scheme XAXXX XXXBXX BXCAX XBXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010010 0101110 11101 0111 11010 1011101 11 110 101 101 01011011 1011111 0101101 1101101 01011110 1101 1011101 1010111 1111 111 101101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 5, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This is another one of my depression free verse poems

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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by dena.lombardo.26 on March 08, 2023

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Dena Lombardo

My name is Dena Lombardo, I am 17 years old. I live in Poplarville Mississippi, and I am suffering from depression. I started writing poems when I was in the 8th grade. I always found that it help me sink into my own world. more…

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