Analysis of Unpefect
Poem: Perfect.
I wish I was her
I wish I had striaght relaxed hair
I wish I had soft feature and good style and a cool bedroom and a cool place
She's perfect
I don't understand why I had to be born into this body
I have thick hair, sharp features and no style
A boring bedroom and place
And even if I did you still wouldn't like me, not because I have a spoiled personality or because I don't look flattering in dresses but because we weren't made for each other
Or I guess I wasn't made for you
Positive that you're perfect for me
But we wouldn't be perfect together because Romeo and Romeo could never make it
We wouldn't exist if it was where Adam & Steve
So I'll continue waiting for a reason to call or for a reason to see you
But nothing will ever change how you see me
I guess ill have to wait and accept that
All I can ever do, is wish that I was her.
BY BOITUMELO LUKHANYO SEKGALO.❤️
| Scheme | ABCDAEFDBGEHIGEJBF |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1001 11110 11111011 111111001100110011 101 110111111101110 1111110011 010101 0101111110111011101010010111110001010111011110 111110111 100110111 1110101010011001011011 110011111101 110101010101111010111 11011011111 1111110011 111101111110 1111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
| Characters | 907 |
| Words | 192 |
| Sentences | 4 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 18 |
| Lines Amount | 18 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
| Words per line (avg) | 10 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 694 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 179 |
About this poem
It's a girl who feels that, she is not enough and wishes that she was a different person dure to what she actually wish she can have.
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Written on February 05, 2023
Submitted by b.sekgalo7 on February 05, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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