Analysis of "The Loneliness of War"

Jolene Frahm 1954 (Iowa)



I couldn't wait to be shipped out,
    I was like a horse chewing at the bit.
But when I finally did arrive,
    I did not really like it!
I even wondered if I would get out alive.

The bullets and bombs;
    came down on us like rain.
But this wasn't soft and gentle;
    it was full of pain!

I missed home;
    I missed Mom's apple pie.
I even missed the bully;
    who used to punchme in the eye.

I wanted to go home;
    Tho I was surrounded by my buddies;

I FELT SO ALL ALONE!
     


Scheme XABAB XCXC DEXE DX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 1110110101 111100101 1111011 110101111101 01001 111111 11101010 11111 111 111101 1101010 1111001 110111 1110101110 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 492
Words 116
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This poem came from being around Veterans. Having their Flashbacks second hand.

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Written on 1999

Submitted by jolene_f on February 26, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

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