Analysis of my crimson damask rose



said Mary-Sue:
"grow-up!"
always did when we
were four

thinking, how big
do you want me to be?

and today, in your opal eyes, I see
the face of a dying child
which now you knew more
when we were four.


Scheme XXAB XA AXBB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 1101 11 1111 01 1011 111111 0010110111 0110101 11111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 202
Words 47
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by eugener.35958 on February 25, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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